exploration of the various dimensions of ... self..a...journey... unborn and....unnamed.......anaamayoham.......thats me.
intense...
What a beautiful take on waves.. very thoughtful ..one can so clearly see... thanks..
Loved to hear from you
these lines have shown me a canvas painted with an rich underwater life, corals and fish, waves, yes.great one.thank you..regards,jayanth.
jayant....!! thanks its a compliment
but only waves keep the water fresh ... otherwise it would stink and stay ... and harm creatures :/
wave...ocean...stream...flow...
wow! That was deep... no, not the corals... ur words! Beautiful..!
corals....disagree with me most of the time
nice form alluding to nature and contrasting images ~ perfect ~
thanks grace for noting the contrast...really appreciate it
Very colorful and creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
Dear AMD and C .....namaste. thanks
Picturesque and amazing haiku! you made a nice picture with words!!! Thanks!
DT.. no picture actually .. may be its the state of mind i am talking about...
Awesome! This one came really deep into my heart. Lovely composed haiku.Namaste
Namaste. CThanks to your heart for allowing words to enter its pristine chambers....
Wonderful write!My Day Five
hi . STG thanks ...
Simple and deep haiku....Beautifully written :)
Hi valli , thanks :)
They give life to each other! Great haiku!Hank
Hi Kaykula... yes they do .. probably thats the reason why corals dont sigh
Enjoyed this very much, debu ... thank you for sharing ... and I appreciate your visit to my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
thanks becca..sorry didnt reply to you earlier
I like the simplicity in this. Nice.
Thanks Patti... i like the honesty in your comments.. as always..
intense...
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful take on waves.. very thoughtful ..one can so clearly see... thanks..
ReplyDeleteLoved to hear from you
Deletethese lines have shown me a canvas painted with an rich underwater life, corals and fish, waves, yes.
ReplyDeletegreat one.
thank you..
regards,
jayanth.
jayant....!! thanks its a compliment
Deletebut only waves keep the water fresh ... otherwise it would stink and stay ... and harm creatures :/
ReplyDeletewave...ocean...stream...flow...
Deletewow! That was deep... no, not the corals... ur words!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful..!
corals....disagree with me most of the time
Deletenice form alluding to nature and contrasting images ~ perfect ~
ReplyDeletethanks grace for noting the contrast...really appreciate it
DeleteVery colorful and creative haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteDear AMD and C .....namaste. thanks
DeletePicturesque and amazing haiku! you made a nice picture with words!!! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteDT.. no picture actually .. may be its the state of mind i am talking about...
DeleteAwesome! This one came really deep into my heart. Lovely composed haiku.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
Namaste. C
DeleteThanks to your heart for allowing words to enter its pristine chambers....
Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteMy Day Five
hi . STG thanks ...
DeleteSimple and deep haiku....Beautifully written :)
ReplyDeleteHi valli , thanks :)
DeleteThey give life to each other! Great haiku!
ReplyDeleteHank
Hi Kaykula... yes they do .. probably thats the reason why corals dont sigh
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this very much, debu ... thank you for sharing ... and I appreciate your visit to my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
ReplyDeletethanks becca..sorry didnt reply to you earlier
DeleteI like the simplicity in this. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patti... i like the honesty in your comments.. as always..
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