Sunday, January 27, 2013

rescue

Two takes on ' rescue"

take 1




Rocks up the creek
never get bored: Waves
often say hi






take 2



Loneliness stalks 
solitude ; voices  
seek wings to flap









Written for Haiku heights



14 comments:

  1. If you choose to comment.. feel free to express. Please do not leave your website / poem link for me to visit. I cant escape destiny.

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  2. 2 unique and lovely haiku...

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  3. The first one is my FAVORITE. The second ain't too shabby! (that's a compliment for those of you who speak a more precise English!)

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    1. thanks judith.. be watchfull for more of aint too shabby ones ..:)

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  4. Very unique, second one intriguing; 'Loneliness stalks solitude'.

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    1. Some times .. insanity ..as it is reflected in the 'voices' ..sometimes is a 'rescue'.

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  5. Solitude.. is saintly.. loneliness an intensely humane phenomenon.

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  6. I like the message... Great interpretation. TY! :-)
    Eliz

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  7. Awesome. I love them both; the second one is my favourite. Well done :-)

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