Two takes on ' rescue"
take 1
take 2
take 1
Rocks up the creek
never get bored: Waves
often say hi
take 2
Loneliness stalks
solitude ; voices
seek wings to flap
Written for Haiku heights
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ReplyDelete2 unique and lovely haiku...
ReplyDeleteDear Joanne
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The first one is my FAVORITE. The second ain't too shabby! (that's a compliment for those of you who speak a more precise English!)
ReplyDeletethanks judith.. be watchfull for more of aint too shabby ones ..:)
DeleteBeautiful set of haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks sri valli
DeleteVery unique, second one intriguing; 'Loneliness stalks solitude'.
ReplyDeleteSome times .. insanity ..as it is reflected in the 'voices' ..sometimes is a 'rescue'.
DeleteSolitude.. is saintly.. loneliness an intensely humane phenomenon.
ReplyDeleteI like the message... Great interpretation. TY! :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thanks Eliz...
ReplyDeleteAwesome. I love them both; the second one is my favourite. Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks GD
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