Monday, April 23, 2012

Mesmerized




In your eyes were hymns 
held unlaced- blossoms of may
mesmerized in beats





April Challenge
Prompt: Mesmerized



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    1. Hi thanks .... loved your Haiku too

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  2. Very poetic, lovely, wonderfull!-"blossoms of may"

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    1. cmon .. JD .. it cant be all the three

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  3. This is exquisite. I love it.

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    1. Yup .. pattiken....i loved it too .. rarely we choke when we write.

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    2. Unlaced hymns can captivate the universe with song!

      Mesmerize

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    3. This set of hymns held me captive in their own universe.

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