Tuesday, April 03, 2012

Harbour

The mystic on grass
seeks shelter- fall is awake
 in shadows of mind


Written for haiku heights
April Challenge
prompt: Harbour



When.........in  love man dares loose all he has except the earth on which he rests.....
leaves  have  fallen and awake is he ....in love ....in every nook ...of the mind...
then...
he is a mystic and there is
........no where to go .......

14 comments:

  1. An intriguing response..I like shadows of the mind ~

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  2. Excellent haiku ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. So different extremely beautiful

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  4. Good haiku Debu..in the state what you write..perhaps seeking is not there.. one just is..loved the thoughts here.. and just a suggestion..from the point of view of haiku...have a relook at syllable in second line... RS:)

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  5. RS ya .the syllable thingy ... need to work on it thanks ..

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  6. Alka, thanks for your comments

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  7. Like a painter's romantic musings!

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    1. loved this one Gemma, it is quite romantic...i just realised

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  8. Well done!! Thank you for sharing!

    This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.

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