The mystic on grass
seeks shelter- fall is awake
in shadows of mind
Written for haiku heights
April Challenge
prompt: Harbour
When.........in love man dares loose all he has except the earth on which he rests.....
leaves have fallen and awake is he ....in love ....in every nook ...of the mind...
then...
he is a mystic and there is
........no where to go .......
An intriguing response..I like shadows of the mind ~
ReplyDeletethanks G.
DeleteExcellent haiku ~ lovely ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDeleteSo different extremely beautiful
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteGood haiku Debu..in the state what you write..perhaps seeking is not there.. one just is..loved the thoughts here.. and just a suggestion..from the point of view of haiku...have a relook at syllable in second line... RS:)
ReplyDeleteRS ya .the syllable thingy ... need to work on it thanks ..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku...Thanks for sharing :)
ReplyDeleteHarbour
Thanks Valli :)
ReplyDeletelove the haiku:)
ReplyDeleteAlka, thanks for your comments
ReplyDeleteLike a painter's romantic musings!
ReplyDeleteloved this one Gemma, it is quite romantic...i just realised
DeleteWell done!! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThis is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.