day we fight
nights are made- ants kiss
just to be
humans make huge fuss about forgiveness... ants in my kitchen.. do it every single time !
forgive me
my grave has bones and
your teeth soft
my apologies to the tribe of millions who shall do the dirty job of cleaning me up in grave
for haiku heights
April challenge
prompt : forgiveness
Even if there are disagreements, life must go on! Fights affect the weak. Truely said, debu. Great haiku!
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fights affect the weak ,,, i love that
DeleteWonderfully composed set of haiku.
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteI loved the first one!
ReplyDeleteso true, we humans always keep making a huge deal!
:) thanks .... and welcome.
DeleteSecond one help me captive for some time... I have put a comment on Rachana's page.. have a look..but, well done..lovely..
ReplyDeletedidn't understand your comment here ..
DeleteYour comment on my haiku: didnt get the first one though...
DeleteYour comment here: didnt get the first one though...
And I thought I always kept it simple.. what I wrote is that many a time you are expected to seek forgiveness even for the mistakes someone else is making to you...
And I thought you would at least speak about what you got...I wrote that for me creation of haiku is a work of heart , mind and soul..for purity..that's it..
help was mis-spelt..it should have been held..
Deletei read it as held.. only after you said i saw it... RS it will help a lot for non poets / non literature fellows like me if you can elaborate on the form/content/ emotions/ nature /style. i will watch the syllables but expect all the other things from you :)
DeleteThis are really good. I like the surprise of kissing ants and a grave with bones.
ReplyDeletewelcome Pattiken...
DeleteI enjoyed your set of haiku. Thank you.
ReplyDeletewelcome...:)
DeleteVery nice set...I specially like the second one...very intriguing image ~
ReplyDeleteIt helps me a lot if you can elaborate on the intrigue.
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