Saturday, April 07, 2012

Forgive

  day we fight 
nights are made- ants kiss
just to be


humans make huge fuss about forgiveness... ants in my kitchen..  do it every single  time !



   forgive me 
my grave  has bones and 
your teeth soft

my apologies to the tribe of millions who shall do the dirty job of cleaning me up in grave 


for haiku heights
April challenge 
prompt : forgiveness

17 comments:

  1. Even if there are disagreements, life must go on! Fights affect the weak. Truely said, debu. Great haiku!

    Hank

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    1. fights affect the weak ,,, i love that

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  2. Wonderfully composed set of haiku.

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  3. I loved the first one!
    so true, we humans always keep making a huge deal!

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  4. Second one help me captive for some time... I have put a comment on Rachana's page.. have a look..but, well done..lovely..

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    1. didn't understand your comment here ..

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    2. Your comment on my haiku: didnt get the first one though...
      Your comment here: didnt get the first one though...

      And I thought I always kept it simple.. what I wrote is that many a time you are expected to seek forgiveness even for the mistakes someone else is making to you...

      And I thought you would at least speak about what you got...I wrote that for me creation of haiku is a work of heart , mind and soul..for purity..that's it..

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    3. help was mis-spelt..it should have been held..

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    4. i read it as held.. only after you said i saw it... RS it will help a lot for non poets / non literature fellows like me if you can elaborate on the form/content/ emotions/ nature /style. i will watch the syllables but expect all the other things from you :)

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  5. This are really good. I like the surprise of kissing ants and a grave with bones.

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  6. I enjoyed your set of haiku. Thank you.

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  7. Very nice set...I specially like the second one...very intriguing image ~

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    1. It helps me a lot if you can elaborate on the intrigue.

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