Sunday, April 22, 2012

Still


Dedicated to the  rendering of
'fields of gold'
 by


Today the music
begins - here and now I lie 
in stillness  , you breathe

you breathe
the song of silence
ice melts

tears  
kiss earth 
gently


Still
I
Stay






april challenge
prompt: Still

19 comments:

  1. i almost wrote one about music too. why does music make us feel still?

    three still haiku and-senryu

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    1. because we stop moving i guess....

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    2. Zongrik .. if you havent heard eva cassidy expecially the ' rendering of ' fields of gold' ... please listen to this

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  2. Very lovely lyrical haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. "you breathe
    the song of silence"..wow!!

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    1. hi JD... ya ,,,,did you hear the song fields of gold from eva cassidy ....it proves what ever i write ... i will remain a small time rat...i loved your wow here...

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  4. How musically expressed!!! I love the theme of your blog... very pleasing! :)
    Queen earth's brown banquet
    Familiar face mistaken identity

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    1. Thanks .. but i think that it is more due to the sense of profound tranquil in your own self :)

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  5. Beautiful and romantic Zoya...Enjoyed reading it :)

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    1. You are so lucky !! i dont know . cant read her still

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  6. This is a beautiful haiku.. foottappingly amazing... cheers

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    1. really... its time for me to become a song writer... !! but fun apart... really liked your comment on foot tapping ..!!

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  7. Nice format you weaved here...a romantic take on the prompt ~

    Cheers ~

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    1. no grace..OR may be... i loved this song of fields of gold by sting... then i saw/heard Eva cassidy.. then i bgan searching for her...within 10 min I learnt that she had moved on...into unexplained silence...its 15 min of glorious romance .. if it is :)

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  8. Music be the food of love, a cliche no doubt. But music mesmerizes and you bring it to the open. How nice, debu!

    Hank

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    1. hank :) thanks for being so honest and expressive...i fully aggree with you but you feel it bcause of you ..:)

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  9. Musical..song of silence..sundar

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