Today the music
begins - here and now I lie
in stillness , you breathe
you breathe
the song of silence
the song of silence
ice melts
tears
kiss earth
gently
Still
I
Stay
Still
I
Stay
for haiku heights
april challenge
prompt: Still
i almost wrote one about music too. why does music make us feel still?
ReplyDeletethree still haiku and-senryu
because we stop moving i guess....
DeleteZongrik .. if you havent heard eva cassidy expecially the ' rendering of ' fields of gold' ... please listen to this
DeleteVery lovely lyrical haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^
ReplyDelete^_^........._/\_
Delete"you breathe
ReplyDeletethe song of silence"..wow!!
hi JD... ya ,,,,did you hear the song fields of gold from eva cassidy ....it proves what ever i write ... i will remain a small time rat...i loved your wow here...
DeleteHow musically expressed!!! I love the theme of your blog... very pleasing! :)
ReplyDeleteQueen earth's brown banquet
Familiar face mistaken identity
Thanks .. but i think that it is more due to the sense of profound tranquil in your own self :)
DeleteBeautiful and romantic Zoya...Enjoyed reading it :)
ReplyDeleteYou are so lucky !! i dont know . cant read her still
DeleteThis is a beautiful haiku.. foottappingly amazing... cheers
ReplyDeletereally... its time for me to become a song writer... !! but fun apart... really liked your comment on foot tapping ..!!
DeleteNice format you weaved here...a romantic take on the prompt ~
ReplyDeleteCheers ~
no grace..OR may be... i loved this song of fields of gold by sting... then i saw/heard Eva cassidy.. then i bgan searching for her...within 10 min I learnt that she had moved on...into unexplained silence...its 15 min of glorious romance .. if it is :)
DeleteMusic be the food of love, a cliche no doubt. But music mesmerizes and you bring it to the open. How nice, debu!
ReplyDeleteHank
hank :) thanks for being so honest and expressive...i fully aggree with you but you feel it bcause of you ..:)
DeleteMusical..song of silence..sundar
ReplyDeleteSundar...as in hindi?
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