Thursday, April 12, 2012

Coherent




eyes dark and blue
no longer lucid - the sea
flutters in its womb



April challenge
prompt: coherent

5 comments:

  1. Very intense feeling and expression here.. well written..Thanks.

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    1. Thanks RS .. hope the syllable count is alright...its not easy to confirm emotions i know.. but the count is important.

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