Monday, April 02, 2012

deserted

Desires abandoned
Naked I dance -bees 
Gather honey 

The bud smiles
as wings flutter-March
is a pebble




written for haiku heights
April Challenge
Prompt: deserted






If I were a flower in the month of march....i would be a pebble .. on the sea shore waiting endlessly for the wave .....do i need to cover my inner most desires...when all i need is a bee...to dig into my core 




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11 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood1:24 PM, April 02, 2012

    First one is very intense.. loved it.. what depth there.. great work.. Debu.. RS:)

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    1. debu2:16 PM, April 02, 2012

      Thanks RS... loved your reply too.. welcome

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  2. Magical Mystical Teacher4:31 PM, April 02, 2012

    To desert one's desires is to free oneself from heavy burdens...

    Deserted Branches

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  3. Mariya Koleva4:38 PM, April 02, 2012

    Beautiful and full of life and nature!

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  4. debu5:16 PM, April 02, 2012

    Thanks Mariya...cant say more than that...

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  5. carol l mckenna7:18 PM, April 02, 2012

    Freedom ~ lovely haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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    1. debu10:53 PM, April 02, 2012

      Thanks AMD and C.....freedom ?.. hmmm ya .. i guess so ..thanks for the new insight.

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  6. Kinara :)11:14 PM, April 02, 2012

    <3.
    When I looked at word deserted, never in my dreams I would have thought of such a creative insight!
    Amazing!:)

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  7. debu1:16 AM, April 03, 2012

    frozen tears
    breach silence- dawn in
    solitude is you

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