Sunday, April 01, 2012

Eager






A moment stays still
poignant breeze breathes time- the
Squirrels are silent now 




in our eagerness we miss out on  small tiny things and lives around us......moments.. that breathe time...like ...gentle summer breeze...and squirrels ..in my hermitage...the den of the recluse ( can they ever be silent ? I wonder)...as I yearn to capture this 'non eager-moment'


submitted for haiku heights
April challenge
17:57

5 comments:

  1. I ask the same question you do: Can the squirrels ever be silent? Maybe when we're not listening...

    Eager Wildflower

    Would you please consider using ONLY comment moderation and forgetting about Blogger's new, and very-difficult-to-read, word verification? My eyes will thank you, and, honestly, you really don't need both. It's overkill. Thanks so much!

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  2. An excellent haiku! Well done.

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  3. MMT,thanks...yest its over kill .. iam twice dead already...
    Karen...thanks

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  4. squirrels can make a lot of nasty sounds

     four eager senryu

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    1. Especially the ones in our minds.....
      yes..
      they do :)...
      ..Zongrik

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