Monday, April 09, 2012

Seashore







on the bed
 waves return - baby crabs
seek mama









written for haiku heights 
April challenge
prompt: seashore

10 comments:

  1. Helpless though hopefull. I like this one.

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  2. Hey Devji,

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  3. This is very well thought out and crafted.. I can see baby-crabs..

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    1. RS!!! counts are wrong. i just coudnt find words

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    2. This poem gives us a lovely "seashore" picture. I can see the tiny crabs :-)

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  4. Short but very expressive :) I like it!

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