Tuesday, April 10, 2012

summer




drops of sweat
sizzle-moons are out
alive souls




written for haiku heights
april challenge
prompt: summer





8 comments:

  1. "sizzle-moons" I like those words. I picture a very hot summer.

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    1. Ellece....sizzzle- moons is not one ... read them separately

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    2. Though not meant to be one, they work quite well together :)

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    3. Yes ... i agree. The intent was to portray a young couple in love , living a life of poverty with nothing much apart from their own bodies and souls to connect to.

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  2. Well done. I can feel the summer heat!

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    1. wow.. did you ?....i feel great...nature felt in words :)

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